I can't find the library. I found the school, the monument, and the starting location (which seems like it traps me, and I have to reset the game). Sorry to bug you with issues. I am definitely enjoying the game very much. :)
If I try to go out the way I came from the starting location, it takes me to Green Plaza instead of back to the city map. Then there's a wall on the bottom of Green Plaza.
Speaking with Daphne didn't allow me to enter the castle.
To return to the city map from the Green Plaza, you have to go next behind the temple. Also, pay attention to what Daphne is asking for, that's the next objective.
Loving this game so far, the art style and world are great. Very good work, I haven’t finished the released chapters yet but I’m looking forward to seeing where things go!
Also I’m currently stuck in the cemetery flower puzzle and I just can’t figure out the solution. Is there any walkthrough available?
Not sure if you still need it, but here is a small hint. (Or something like that, I will try to put it into a spoiler, but it will probably not work on here.
Edit: Nope it does not. *Sigh* Guess I will just use line breaks. (Click on 'View Rest' for the Hint)
Hint: There is a mention of both type of flowers being set in a very particular shape. See if you can think about portraying that shape onto the grave stones (all of them combined).
Also: If there is more than one type of flower - and shape - this may also mean that there is more than one possible solution.
That with some trying around should hopefully do the trick.
I actually downloaded this from rpgmaker, but I'm commenting on here. I've only done Chapter 1 so far.
This. Game. Is. AMAZING.
The amount of love put into this game is insane, and this much content in a free game is criminal. I'll give a full review once I've finished all current content, but sincerely thank you already for this wonderful experience!
btw Please add the Female Protagonist tag so you get more traffic.
Posting this here as well, as reviews are only readable by followers for some reason.
[Review of the First Chapter]
Charming art and relatable characters. The story and setting is loosely inspired by one of my childhood favourites and is already intriguing to follow. I also liked the lore-building within the areas.
If I would need to mention something to improve it would be everything, really - which I don't mean in a bad way.
The game just needs a bit more polishing in all areas to make what there is shine even more. Seeing that this is only the first chapter, I think this is a solid start.
Keep up the great work!
____________________
On a side note, I also did not mind the pacing - which is not meant to be a shot against anyone. It just means that different people enjoy different styles of how a game portrays itself.
I would say it may be something for people who take their time if something grabs their interest.
I really enjoyed the second kingdom and the style/character of its inhabitants. The story continued as expected and the characters (old and new) kept their charme.
The dungeon was great. I liked how the theme was executed in both lore and gameplay.
I also liked the small touches for getting into the kingdom and dungeon, respectively. Leafko changing the outfit visibly instead of just stat-wise was also a nice surprise.
The two side activities are a good addition, it was fun looking for the hidden items. The idea with writing back a letter with different answers is interesting, I am looking forward to how that will turn out.
As far as feedback goes: I would mostly suggest another round of bug hunting before release. I did found two issues in the first chapter which should be new. I also stumbled on multiple scenes where the english translation did not trigger.
There are also a few things I would look into in regards of polishing. For example how item management is handled after certain events.
While I enjoyed the battles and how both characters have their roles (in both chapters), the balance still is a bit off. Enemies started a bit more difficult in chapter 2, but they quickly became incapable of really hurting me (exception being the solo-vents and bosses) while having the highest defence stats in regards of equipment. I did need to buy a few mana recovers in the dungeon, but other items and ailment spells seemed rather unneeded/ineffective against enemies.
Equipment also seemed to be mostly weaker than what I already had (except the upgrade to the nut items), so the armour shop seemed a bit underwhelming in that regard.
I don't think these things have to be overhauled completely, I did like the freedom of playing how you like. But a bit of fine tuning would probably make that even more enjoyable.
---------------
A bit more on the feedback side this time, but as said, I did really enjoy where the journey is going and the different story and gameplay aspects you have put in.
I liked the different gameplay approach for both the town and dungeon area. They were also again nicely crafted. I also noted various improvements in terms of adjustments, fixes and qol, which is great.
What I would note as improvable would be the following things:
- The balancing in fights still seemed a bit off if you have the best gear in the game. Again, I like that it does not force you to do combat a certain way, but none of the encounters came even close to being dangerous for me. If I had to put it in numbers, maybe increasing the enemies damage output by 10 to 20% would be something to go for?
- The "quiz" in each temple room was a tad too trial and error, I think. The right answer always made sense after choosing it in terms of where the story wanted to go with it - but without that prior knowledge it was really easy to mess up each row of questions multiple times. Maybe putting slight hints before some of the decisions would help?
- I would also suggest lowering the encounter rate within the puzzle rooms. While I did not mind having them in general to have a constant sum of fights during the dungeon, they started becoming so frequent that they became a bit distracting while solving the puzzles.
- I still had some items left in my inventory I "should not" at the end of the chapter. While not too troublesome, I would assume it could become convoluted at some point. Specifically, I remember the "bonus item" you can get in the temple not being consumed after having used it in the village, as well as some key items from dungeon 1 and 2.
- I had Mora as the first party member during the entire temple area. I am not sure if that was intended, as the scene where you lose the big key was incorrect because of that.
Other than that, it was very enjoyable. As always, the game does not hold your hand at times in terms of what you have to do next, which I do appreciate. I also want to praise that this chapter felt more tight and polished, at least with the current update. There were some minor mistakes here and there, but nothing bad.
Overall, a great chapter and a solid improvement in terms of delivery.
This chapter marked a sort of return, both literally in form of re-visiting the citadel, but also in some of the pacing and gameplay.
I liked where the story was going with the characters, as well as the dungeon, which definitely took up most of the playtime this time around.
The ideas for each area of the ruined city were well implemented (I think the 'hunt' could get a bit out of hands with how the spawns worked sometimes). The riddles still proved difficult for me to see how they were meant to narrow down the solution (maybe I am just thinking too directly?), but they felt more lenient in how you could still solve them (I really liked the end of the rose route, by the way).
In terms of side attractions, I like the concept of using the flowers from Daphne for something else, although I never really felt the elements to be that important in battle. (I also found the double-weapon way more practical). I also enjoyed the actually more hidden side quest to find out… ‘something’.
On the feedback side, once again I would suggest a broader testing run before release. I found a bunch of little quirks and oversights, as well as a few confusing and player locking issues. Some of them appeared during normal gameplay, some when re-visiting locations during or after the chapter.
So, really solid chapter once again. It felt a bit weaker compared to the third one, but I could not even say why. I think there is no real reason. Everyone simply has their favourite part of a game and I always try to find a 'feeling' of how a chapter came across to me. As mentioned in the beginning, this one felt like a mixture of chapter 1, combined with something new and returning from the other chapters, as well. Which, given the point and story of it, fits this chapter really well and is definitely not something bad in a good game.
From a game dev perspective, I am leaning towards this chapter being the most impressive.
Not only did the dungeon change to give yet another entertaining concept, but you also return to previous areas for short objectives and cutscenes, which made the whole Kingdom of Forestia feel alive and ongoing.
It also marked the tie of some loose ends in story bits of the previous chapters, as you finally meet the character foreshadowed all along.
They are certainly an interesting type, heavily influencing not only events but also how you play.
There have been improvements to the battle system and balancing, and while still not perfect in every encounter, it did come together quite engaging.
The way scenes are handled and the gameplay is expanded upon, you can clearly see the growth of the developer.
On the feedback side, as usual: A solid final round of testing - and trying to make sure not to break previous things.
I had more soft-locks then there should have been. I guess the good news is that by finishing the game, it should be clearable as of now.
So hey, check it out.
Overall: Really, really enjoyable. Probably even surpassed the third chapter for me objectively.
Great work.
[PS: Tiny bug report]
- The chest in Fertile's Room has no 'Item obtained' message when you open it by yourself.
- The janitor in the academy is not solid and you can walk through him.
- The Worm and Pepper enemies are slightly overpowered in the beginning. Reducing their damage or HP would be good to survive them.
- Maize is a bit buggy the first time around (Cutscene), as well as when trying to talk to her. (Invisible)
- The North Exit out of the Citadel is not working, so you have to walk all the way around when going to Manzos
- I believe some mechanics in the Insect Fortress didn't work quite right. Some enemies stayed tied up after leaving the rooms, and my partner's 'mechanic' seemed to get a tad desynched with his actual behaviour/menu portrait until I found a recovery point.
This game is pretty endearing, but I think, as of now, it's abundant in dialogues and lacking in gameplay. I understand that story probably is the focus of the game, but I don't think it's that fun to play a game where there is such few, actual gameplay mechanics. I didn't play for so long, but most of my gameplay time was mostly dialogues and walking to the places where I needed to be in order to have those dialogues. The battles I've seen are okay, there are really standard and simple, and they work (I particularly don't like the random encounter thing), but there were really few and it lacked enemy variety. There wasn't much to explore in the maps either, there were few NPC dialogues and the maps were very square, so the focus really went to the main story. The story looks good but the beggining is quite slow... There's nothing to really FISH the player attention to the story. The world is pretty interesting, it really left me wanting do discover it. The graphics are really beatiful. The music is okay, it didn't had my attention but it matched what was happening in the screen.
What I say here may sound harsh, but that's only make the game better. It's only a opinion too, it has a lot of my personal biases and stuff. I didn't even play the full game. Well, I hope the best luck of you with your project!
If you like to see me playing the game too there's this extremely shitty gameplay I made for it:
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I got the dress from the tailor and I'm not sure what I'm supposed to do next. "I don't want to go back to the castle yet."
Your general task is to explore the city now. If I remember correctly you have to go to the academy and speak to Daphne in the Central Library.
I can't find the library. I found the school, the monument, and the starting location (which seems like it traps me, and I have to reset the game). Sorry to bug you with issues. I am definitely enjoying the game very much. :)
The library is on the school, take the hallway in the middle where the classrooms are.
Where exactly did you get trapped in the starting location?
If I try to go out the way I came from the starting location, it takes me to Green Plaza instead of back to the city map. Then there's a wall on the bottom of Green Plaza.
Speaking with Daphne didn't allow me to enter the castle.
To return to the city map from the Green Plaza, you have to go next behind the temple. Also, pay attention to what Daphne is asking for, that's the next objective.
Loving this game so far, the art style and world are great. Very good work, I haven’t finished the released chapters yet but I’m looking forward to seeing where things go!
Also I’m currently stuck in the cemetery flower puzzle and I just can’t figure out the solution. Is there any walkthrough available?
Not sure if you still need it, but here is a small hint. (Or something like that, I will try to put it into a spoiler, but it will probably not work on here.
Edit: Nope it does not. *Sigh* Guess I will just use line breaks. (Click on 'View Rest' for the Hint)
Hint: There is a mention of both type of flowers being set in a very particular shape. See if you can think about portraying that shape onto the grave stones (all of them combined).
Also: If there is more than one type of flower - and shape - this may also mean that there is more than one possible solution.
That with some trying around should hopefully do the trick.
that helped me, thank you
I actually downloaded this from rpgmaker, but I'm commenting on here. I've only done Chapter 1 so far.
This. Game. Is. AMAZING.
The amount of love put into this game is insane, and this much content in a free game is criminal. I'll give a full review once I've finished all current content, but sincerely thank you already for this wonderful experience!
btw Please add the Female Protagonist tag so you get more traffic.
Esta bonito, me gusto el arte del juego.
Posting this here as well, as reviews are only readable by followers for some reason.
[Review of the First Chapter]
Charming art and relatable characters. The story and setting is loosely inspired by one of my childhood favourites and is already intriguing to follow. I also liked the lore-building within the areas.
If I would need to mention something to improve it would be everything, really - which I don't mean in a bad way.
The game just needs a bit more polishing in all areas to make what there is shine even more. Seeing that this is only the first chapter, I think this is a solid start.
Keep up the great work!
____________________
On a side note, I also did not mind the pacing - which is not meant to be a shot against anyone. It just means that different people enjoy different styles of how a game portrays itself.
I would say it may be something for people who take their time if something grabs their interest.
Just try it out!
[Review for Chapter 2]
I really enjoyed the second kingdom and the style/character of its inhabitants. The story continued as expected and the characters (old and new) kept their charme.
The dungeon was great. I liked how the theme was executed in both lore and gameplay.
I also liked the small touches for getting into the kingdom and dungeon, respectively. Leafko changing the outfit visibly instead of just stat-wise was also a nice surprise.
The two side activities are a good addition, it was fun looking for the hidden items. The idea with writing back a letter with different answers is interesting, I am looking forward to how that will turn out.
As far as feedback goes: I would mostly suggest another round of bug hunting before release. I did found two issues in the first chapter which should be new. I also stumbled on multiple scenes where the english translation did not trigger.
There are also a few things I would look into in regards of polishing. For example how item management is handled after certain events.
While I enjoyed the battles and how both characters have their roles (in both chapters), the balance still is a bit off. Enemies started a bit more difficult in chapter 2, but they quickly became incapable of really hurting me (exception being the solo-vents and bosses) while having the highest defence stats in regards of equipment. I did need to buy a few mana recovers in the dungeon, but other items and ailment spells seemed rather unneeded/ineffective against enemies.
Equipment also seemed to be mostly weaker than what I already had (except the upgrade to the nut items), so the armour shop seemed a bit underwhelming in that regard.
I don't think these things have to be overhauled completely, I did like the freedom of playing how you like. But a bit of fine tuning would probably make that even more enjoyable.
---------------
A bit more on the feedback side this time, but as said, I did really enjoy where the journey is going and the different story and gameplay aspects you have put in.
Thanks for the update and keep up the good work!
[Review for Chapter 3]
I liked the different gameplay approach for both the town and dungeon area. They were also again nicely crafted. I also noted various improvements in terms of adjustments, fixes and qol, which is great.
What I would note as improvable would be the following things:
- The balancing in fights still seemed a bit off if you have the best gear in the game. Again, I like that it does not force you to do combat a certain way, but none of the encounters came even close to being dangerous for me. If I had to put it in numbers, maybe increasing the enemies damage output by 10 to 20% would be something to go for?
- The "quiz" in each temple room was a tad too trial and error, I think. The right answer always made sense after choosing it in terms of where the story wanted to go with it - but without that prior knowledge it was really easy to mess up each row of questions multiple times. Maybe putting slight hints before some of the decisions would help?
- I would also suggest lowering the encounter rate within the puzzle rooms. While I did not mind having them in general to have a constant sum of fights during the dungeon, they started becoming so frequent that they became a bit distracting while solving the puzzles.
- I still had some items left in my inventory I "should not" at the end of the chapter. While not too troublesome, I would assume it could become convoluted at some point. Specifically, I remember the "bonus item" you can get in the temple not being consumed after having used it in the village, as well as some key items from dungeon 1 and 2.
- I had Mora as the first party member during the entire temple area. I am not sure if that was intended, as the scene where you lose the big key was incorrect because of that.
Other than that, it was very enjoyable. As always, the game does not hold your hand at times in terms of what you have to do next, which I do appreciate. I also want to praise that this chapter felt more tight and polished, at least with the current update. There were some minor mistakes here and there, but nothing bad.
Overall, a great chapter and a solid improvement in terms of delivery.
Keep it up.
[Review of Chapter 4]
This chapter marked a sort of return, both literally in form of re-visiting the citadel, but also in some of the pacing and gameplay.
I liked where the story was going with the characters, as well as the dungeon, which definitely took up most of the playtime this time around.
The ideas for each area of the ruined city were well implemented (I think the 'hunt' could get a bit out of hands with how the spawns worked sometimes). The riddles still proved difficult for me to see how they were meant to narrow down the solution (maybe I am just thinking too directly?), but they felt more lenient in how you could still solve them (I really liked the end of the rose route, by the way).
In terms of side attractions, I like the concept of using the flowers from Daphne for something else, although I never really felt the elements to be that important in battle. (I also found the double-weapon way more practical). I also enjoyed the actually more hidden side quest to find out… ‘something’.
On the feedback side, once again I would suggest a broader testing run before release. I found a bunch of little quirks and oversights, as well as a few confusing and player locking issues. Some of them appeared during normal gameplay, some when re-visiting locations during or after the chapter.
So, really solid chapter once again. It felt a bit weaker compared to the third one, but I could not even say why. I think there is no real reason. Everyone simply has their favourite part of a game and I always try to find a 'feeling' of how a chapter came across to me. As mentioned in the beginning, this one felt like a mixture of chapter 1, combined with something new and returning from the other chapters, as well. Which, given the point and story of it, fits this chapter really well and is definitely not something bad in a good game.
Great job as always.
[Review of Chapter 5]
From a game dev perspective, I am leaning towards this chapter being the most impressive.
Not only did the dungeon change to give yet another entertaining concept, but you also return to previous areas for short objectives and cutscenes, which made the whole Kingdom of Forestia feel alive and ongoing.
It also marked the tie of some loose ends in story bits of the previous chapters, as you finally meet the character foreshadowed all along.
They are certainly an interesting type, heavily influencing not only events but also how you play.
There have been improvements to the battle system and balancing, and while still not perfect in every encounter, it did come together quite engaging.
The way scenes are handled and the gameplay is expanded upon, you can clearly see the growth of the developer.
On the feedback side, as usual: A solid final round of testing - and trying to make sure not to break previous things.
I had more soft-locks then there should have been. I guess the good news is that by finishing the game, it should be clearable as of now.
So hey, check it out.
Overall: Really, really enjoyable. Probably even surpassed the third chapter for me objectively.
Great work.
[PS: Tiny bug report]
- The chest in Fertile's Room has no 'Item obtained' message when you open it by yourself.
- The janitor in the academy is not solid and you can walk through him.
- The Worm and Pepper enemies are slightly overpowered in the beginning. Reducing their damage or HP would be good to survive them.
- Maize is a bit buggy the first time around (Cutscene), as well as when trying to talk to her. (Invisible)
- The North Exit out of the Citadel is not working, so you have to walk all the way around when going to Manzos
- I believe some mechanics in the Insect Fortress didn't work quite right. Some enemies stayed tied up after leaving the rooms, and my partner's 'mechanic' seemed to get a tad desynched with his actual behaviour/menu portrait until I found a recovery point.
This game is pretty endearing, but I think, as of now, it's abundant in dialogues and lacking in gameplay. I understand that story probably is the focus of the game, but I don't think it's that fun to play a game where there is such few, actual gameplay mechanics. I didn't play for so long, but most of my gameplay time was mostly dialogues and walking to the places where I needed to be in order to have those dialogues. The battles I've seen are okay, there are really standard and simple, and they work (I particularly don't like the random encounter thing), but there were really few and it lacked enemy variety. There wasn't much to explore in the maps either, there were few NPC dialogues and the maps were very square, so the focus really went to the main story. The story looks good but the beggining is quite slow... There's nothing to really FISH the player attention to the story. The world is pretty interesting, it really left me wanting do discover it. The graphics are really beatiful. The music is okay, it didn't had my attention but it matched what was happening in the screen.
What I say here may sound harsh, but that's only make the game better. It's only a opinion too, it has a lot of my personal biases and stuff. I didn't even play the full game. Well, I hope the best luck of you with your project!
If you like to see me playing the game too there's this extremely shitty gameplay I made for it: